Bandit Design

So I am not very good with character design...yet.. x] but this is the theme for my SJSU Art group so I thought I would do some bandit designs or something like that I wish I had more experience with this but practice makes perfect! If you guys have tips that would be great as well! I also felt like I should have just done something cartoony would've been easier in my part, but with this I just tried to get a layout of clothing and then try to make the lighting fit into everything!